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    Peggy
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    I have a little flower, just outside my room
    And every time it’s springtime, my little flower blooms

    By day it’s touched by sunlight, at night kissed by the moon
    Then suddenly it’s winter, my flower fades too soon

    I watch it as it boldly tucks itself away
    To face all by itself, each cold and blustry day

    It’s petals all have shattered, it’s leaves are bent and bruised
    I wonder how it can survive, to have been so much abused

    When winter time has faded and springtime takes it’s place
    I look outside my window, with awe upon my face

    For my little flower, so small but yet so brave
    Has made it through one more time to stun me with it’s grace

    PH (C 2007)

    #48145
    gettingold
    Participant

    You write something nice and end up worrying about whether we think you know your seasons? delete that part. It detracts from the mood of the poem.IMO

    #48146
    Peggy
    Member

    Okay poof, done!

    #48151
    generall
    Participant

    Very nice Peggy. I enjoyed it a lot 🙂 Always knew you were talented. 🙂

    #48152
    Peggy
    Member

    Thanks G, was something I wrote years ago, and just came across it yesterday while I was cleaning up some stuff! We have many talented people here, including you!

    #48155
    generall
    Participant

    😀 😀 Aren’t we special 😀 😀

    #48159
    gettingold
    Participant

    @generall wrote:

    😀 😀 Aren’t we special 😀 😀

    so is one of the cereals I know and all it does is lay there and soak up milk

    #48171
    Peggy
    Member

    Oh no, GG, it’s better than that, it’s stays crispy!!

    #48176
    gettingold
    Participant

    @Peggy wrote:

    Oh no, GG, it’s better than that, it’s stays crispy!!

    I’ll take your word for it. Obviously I have never tried it

    #48268
    generall
    Participant

    😆 😆 Wish I was a Kellogg’s corn flake, floating in my bowl taking movies. Simon and Garfunkle… http://www.lyricsdepot.com/simon-and-garfunkel/punkys-dilemma.html

    #48486
    Peggy
    Member

    😆

    #51329
    Redstormy
    Member

    This is lovely Peggy, I didn’t know you also wrote poetry.

    Red

    #51330
    Peggy
    Member

    Thanks Red! Well, I’ve just dabbled in it, on and off since I could remember!

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